Can you guys listen to this guitar tune i wrote and recorded?

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    Jul 05, 2010 2:00 AM GMT
    it streams on that link so you dont have to DL or anything. Any comments would be awesome! thanks guys

    http://www.supload.com/listen?s=dy6zuI
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    Jul 05, 2010 3:47 AM GMT
    Well, I sure can appreciate the skill that went into it. I'm not too big on songs without lyrics. You do play well, though!
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    Jul 05, 2010 3:58 AM GMT
    thanks. Well if i could sing i would haha. I did the whole song with 1 guitar that only has 4 strings and recorded with my computer microphone haha
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    Jul 05, 2010 4:08 AM GMT
    the colors are nice, and i like the exotic melodies...kind of mid-east meets asia but with grits for breakfast.

    my only suggestion is that you make your ideas clearer by keeping the accompaniment out of the way...in reality we only can hear about three different voices at once: the melody, the accompaniment, and any counter voice. many more than that and we have a hard time telling what it is you're trying to say.

    you have some great ideas and like i said, a great sense of color. we just need you to help us hear what line is most important, which is next important and which is just accompaniment and texture.

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    Jul 05, 2010 4:14 AM GMT
    yeah i understand it sounds a bit muddy at times.. my recording equipment is VERY limited haha. So i have to layer a lot to cover up the static and other outside noises. If i had real equipment i could make it sound much better. Thanks for the comment icon_smile.gif And yeah i was going for an asian mideast deep south sound all mixed together.. i think it was true blood that gave me this sound lol
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    Jul 05, 2010 5:34 AM GMT
    Nice licks, nice melodies.. could actually sound great properly arranged and in concert
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    Jul 05, 2010 10:35 AM GMT
    Not bad at all. I usually don't listen to rock but I supporting indie artist is something I enjoy doing. Good work!
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    Jul 05, 2010 10:43 AM GMT
    It is actually good.

    Here a little tip to make it sound more nice. Bring out the licks and riffs by upping some volume and drown the rest into background.

    When somebody mentioned mid-east meets Asia, I don't why I thought of "Dream Brother" by Jeff Buckley.
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    Jul 05, 2010 10:59 AM GMT
    Nice work, and impressive with the equipment you have. It would make a great Bollywood movie score. icon_wink.gif