the colors are nice, and i like the exotic melodies...kind of mid-east meets asia but with grits for breakfast.
my only suggestion is that you make your ideas clearer by keeping the accompaniment out of the way...in reality we only can hear about three different voices at once: the melody, the accompaniment, and any counter voice. many more than that and we have a hard time telling what it is you're trying to say.
you have some great ideas and like i said, a great sense of color. we just need you to help us hear what line is most important, which is next important and which is just accompaniment and texture.