My Poem

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    Jul 21, 2010 5:30 AM GMT
    This is an introspective poem piece I wrote today, hope you enjoy the read...

    The Fundamentals to a Question
    by JJG

    Why do simple tendencies fight with my complex illusions?
    ….when simplicities can only wish upon the immortal word.
    Why does rain rewind in compliance to nature’s infusions?
    …when half my moon is all the surface can afford…

    Why can’t the cards play their game on a mirrored field?
    …when the players themselves are the cause of the demise.
    Why can’t inner revolutions be won in a single yield?
    …when all it takes is the choice to help the one’s with cries.

    When can we create a world where desire meets 'he', the discipline?
    …when the animal within is hard to deny or to tame.
    When can the placebo & pressures of society get rid of 'he', the sin?
    …when words of life & those of death have the same name.

    When can the balance of freedom & change become a fair one?
    …when we are enslaved in the mirage of our own democracy.
    When was the last time you truly took in & obeyed the sun?
    …when the mercy of oneself lies in denial & hypocrisy.

    Why have I not met the other half of my star once a time full?
    …when the journey alone is just beginning to transcend.
    Why have we created protagonists of our own tragic dual?
    …when we possess the powers to heal and ever-mend.

    Why have the paradoxes become holders of common mysteries?
    …when the answers lived right in front of us all this time.
    Why have we begun to ignore our past lives & elusive ancestries?
    …when the colors of life itself reside in yours & in mine.

    There is nothing else but hope & ponder the mortal questions,
    …even though the answers to them may never come.
    There is nothing else but using the power of lucid suggestions,
    …to assist the endurance of time & the romance to gun.

    All I can do is smile for a world viewed through a filtered screen
    …for love & joy is what I have sacrificed the most & traded in.
    We can give, inspire & live inside our very own vivid dream
    …a burden to seal & cornerstone for the person I’ve always, always been….

    …to be continued….
  • shirty

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    Jul 21, 2010 1:11 PM GMT
    love it, thanks for sharing. I can relate!
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    Jul 21, 2010 3:29 PM GMT
    It was my pleasure, thank you ;) I'm glad you understand it icon_smile.gif
  • mybud

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    Jul 21, 2010 9:42 PM GMT
    You have true talent man....keep writing...BUD
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    Jul 25, 2010 12:23 AM GMT
    super nice... :'( but true
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    Jul 25, 2010 3:16 AM GMT
    I kind of came to this thread with reservation, but that was actually really good! Keep working on your stuff!