My Heart Melts In The Rain

  • masculumpedes

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    Jul 23, 2010 4:58 AM GMT
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    He wakes me
    in the middle of the night
    A firm shove and then a whispered
    Shhhhh, listen.

    He wakes me to hear the rain above our ceiling
    A low and persistent tapping sound
    Thousands of fervent typists hard at work
    Only slightly louder than my own racing thoughts

    Later, our fingers slide together
    Finding the rhythm of the storm together
    until the only sound is a long whispered
    Shhhhh
  • HOTWEILLER

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    Jul 23, 2010 5:03 AM GMT
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    Jul 23, 2010 5:40 AM GMT
    Did you write this, Will? It's quite lovely, and an even lovelier respite from all the cloying 'poetry' crap that's been posted lately.
  • HOTWEILLER

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    Jul 23, 2010 5:41 AM GMT
    I agree with u Ciarsolo
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    Jul 23, 2010 5:46 AM GMT
    WRESTLINGGUY saidI agree with u Ciarsolo


    This is good. It means I won't be forced to destroy you.

    ^_^
  • masculumpedes

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    Jul 23, 2010 6:00 AM GMT
    Ciarsolo saidDid you write this, Will? It's quite lovely, and an even lovelier respite from all the cloying 'poetry' crap that's been posted lately.


    Thanks...I posted this one because I received a couple of compliments from a couple of the other guys on another one... http://www.realjock.com/gayforums/1046941/...so..I figured ....what the heck...lol
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    Jul 23, 2010 6:47 AM GMT
    That's really good stuff, Will. I felt like I was there.


    -Doug


    *edit* That brought back some really great memories of the first night in our last house Will. It rained while we lay awake, enjoying the sound it made.

    -Bill
  • HOTWEILLER

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    Jul 23, 2010 7:02 AM GMT
    Ciarsolo


    This is good. It means I won't be forced to destroy you.

    ^_^


    Even if u wanted u just couldn`t.
  • masculumpedes

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    Jul 23, 2010 7:03 AM GMT
    WRESTLINGGUY said
    Ciarsolo


    This is good. It means I won't be forced to destroy you.

    ^_^


    Even if u wanted u just couldn`t.


    Yeah, you are a pretty lovable kind of guy.....and very handsome icon_wink.gif
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    Jul 23, 2010 7:09 AM GMT
    malefeet said
    WRESTLINGGUY said
    Ciarsolo


    This is good. It means I won't be forced to destroy you.

    ^_^


    Even if u wanted u just couldn`t.


    Yeah, you are a pretty lovable kind of guy.....and very handsome icon_wink.gif


    AND he is warmly pensive, thoughtful, self-questioning and expressive, too.

  • HOTWEILLER

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    Jul 23, 2010 8:16 AM GMT
    Ohhhhhh how i wish i could fall in love without destroying your hearts!
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    Jul 23, 2010 1:58 PM GMT
    WRESTLINGGUY saidOhhhhhh how i wish i could fall in love without destroying your hearts!



    Wish granted.
    We are, after all, god parents in real life, and being gay, this makes us Fairy Godfathers.
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    Jul 23, 2010 2:24 PM GMT
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    lololol
  • Celticmusl

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    Jul 23, 2010 2:49 PM GMT
    I love sugary hearts that melt in the rain. Delicious.
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    Jul 23, 2010 2:57 PM GMT
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    Genius!!! icon_lol.gif

    And the poem Will.. you're a very talented writer icon_cool.gif
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    Jul 23, 2010 7:40 PM GMT
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    He wakes me
    in the middle of the night
    A firm shove and then a whispered
    Shhhhh, listen.

    He wakes me to hear the rain above our ceiling
    A low and persistent tapping sound
    Thousands of fervent typists hard at work
    Only slightly louder than my own racing thoughts

    Later, our fingers slide together
    Finding the rhythm of the storm together
    until the only sound is a long whispered
    Shhhhh

    Beautiful!
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    Jul 23, 2010 7:43 PM GMT
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    AHAHHAHAHAHA lol awesomeness
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    Jul 23, 2010 7:46 PM GMT
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    hes hot
  • HOTWEILLER

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    Jul 23, 2010 10:43 PM GMT
    meninlove



    Wish granted.
    We are, after all, god parents in real life, and being gay, this makes us Fairy Godfathers.



    Ohhhh So sweetie. I wish i could have and old, masculine and daddy boyfriend. Please turn real this dream too!
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    Jul 23, 2010 10:52 PM GMT
    Will you are my Snowy Day
  • masculumpedes

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    Jul 23, 2010 10:56 PM GMT
    dustin_K_tx saidWill you are my Snow Day


    Thanks....( I think...) icon_wink.gif
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    Jul 24, 2010 5:09 AM GMT
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    Jul 24, 2010 5:23 AM GMT
    I do have to agree with others that this is quite good and also with others about the quality of some other poetry that have been posted lately. Because of the attempt at poetry of others, when I came into this thread and saw it was a poem, my first instinct was to leave right away without reading it. But I am glad I did not, as I was really impressed.
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    Jul 24, 2010 5:54 AM GMT
    beautiful. I really enjoyed that, thanks for sharing it with us.icon_biggrin.gif