【Live】A story with my younger cousin

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    Aug 05, 2010 6:25 AM GMT
    i write this story for two purposes , one is to share this story ,and the other to practise my poor English.. hope you can understand my work ... lol i will update this from time to time .. icon_smile.gif
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    Aug 05, 2010 6:26 AM GMT
    Chanter 1
    I carefully switch the key, creeping to push the iron door, with the sound of “squeak….”(WTF, can’t this old iron soldier be nicer to me?! I would be dead if my mum found me getting back so late. To be frank, I am not afraid of my mum’s blame, but you know, middle-aged woman's mouth is a terrorist, who I barely stand.

    “Who did you hang out with?”
    “Where did you go?”
    “How did you go and what did you play ?”
    “Any girls?”

    Blah , blah ……those stupid questions can’t allow me to go to bed until 3:30am. As a result I have to be quiet when walking in. like a professional conduct of the thief.

    A pair of foot without slippers step into the living room , I take a quick glance at the old couple’s bedroom, o(╯□╰)o(gosh, they are awake! Are they waiting for me ?!) Whatever~~. I flash into my own room first, nothing big deal~~! When asked , I can pretend that I am back before midnight. .HUM . Yes,, sleep always comes first!!!, without open my room light, I directly fall towards my dear bed~~ , oh I love u!!!!

    Oh wait!!, My bed???? Where is it ???? with the dim moon light through the window, I look entirely around my room accompanying me 18 years. Where is MY big bed??. what the FxxK is it ? how the school dormitory bunk bed is floated to my room? Oh no……..

    I angrily go into my parents’ room with my bare feet, at the risk of that mum’s mouth, “ What the hell is wrong with my bed room?! Mum…”
    The atmosphere seems to be strange. Mum , sitting on the bed arms across back oon the bed, a look of gloom, without any surprise at my sudden rushing in. she .moved her lips,” ask your dad..”

    ( to be continued)
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    Aug 05, 2010 3:03 PM GMT
    And then I turn my head to my dad sitting on that old fashioned chair. He puts down the cigarette in hand, stands up, speaks to me in an yes-saying way, “ Your aunt’s son, who comes back to shanghai to take part in National College Entrance Examination, is going to spend his senior year in our home, so you gotta get used to this.”

    “ No kidding?! Hasn’t he lived in Dongbei (northeast part of China) so well for years???” At the thought of living with the other person, I start to blame, how inconvenient when I am doing something private…

    “ however good Dongbei is , after all shanghai is his hometown! Why don’t you just cant stand a 17-year old boy, both of YOU?”( dad seems to be very angry)
    “ he has an uncle here , doesn’t he?” I asked quietly.
    “don’t you know how small your uncle’s house?! Beside his daughter( Ting ting ) is a young girl. how inconvenient it is what’s more , we owe your aunt so much, now she is taking care of your grand parents, no matter what, her son should come to live here!!….、

    It is so obvious that my dad had a fierce quarrel with my mu before I arrive homw. Looking at his super red face, I feel so scared…I guess my mum cant do nothing about it either. However, I still cant be satisfied with my privacy under others’ eyes…

    I try to argue,“ me , a party animal ,I am afraid my bad habits will affect him negatively…”

    “ No more saying….anyhow, when you begin your new term you only come to stay home on weekends, why not share it with him?! It is late now , go to bed.. you gotta get up early tomorrow, Yangyang will be here the day after tomorrow!” my dad push me back to my room and shut their own door. bang "slamming the door in the nose knocking on the front

    I feel so uncomfortable to return to my room. Aiming at that double-decker dunk beds, thrown myself into it---my “single” life is almost over like my BIG bed , never coming back ….(By the way, what is my cousin’s name again ??? )

    to be continued .. .
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    Aug 05, 2010 3:05 PM GMT
    hi guys , i am really looking forward to your feedbacks about my work, i will continue my work if you guys like it ... let me know how you find it ~~!!icon_biggrin.gif
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    Aug 05, 2010 3:06 PM GMT
    Still waiting for the rest of teh story!!
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    Aug 05, 2010 3:53 PM GMT
    amar_m saidStill waiting for the rest of teh story!!


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    so glad to see you enjoy it . it means a lot me ....
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    Aug 05, 2010 3:53 PM GMT
    i must say , those names of people and places are not real ones.. ....
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    Aug 05, 2010 3:54 PM GMT
    Chapter 2
    Finally the terminator of my big bed gets to our house after two days. “Hi, I’m Leyang, you can call me Yangyang.” A self introduction under my dad’s guidance , the way he speaks is like a freshman.

    I am kinda of shocked , not because his simple opening words, but …. Is he really a guy from Dongbei?

    Frankly speaking, when I cleaned my room yesterday, I cant resist to think what he really looks like? Qiqihaer, helongjiang, Dongbei, a 17-year-old guy ( becoming mature), he may be a strong bear type guy, with a little bit beard? However, the person in front of me has creamy white skin, red lips ,pearl teeth, dark eyebrow.and big eyes. Don’t blame me . I don’t have many proper English words to describe his looks. Anyway, this kind of person from Dongbei must be very rare…or maybe I don’t get to know much about them( I have never been out of shanghai). Whatever , his mum( my aunt) is a shanghai lady, he may get something from his mum, like his looks….

    “hello, im li zhong ming, ” I follow him as he introduced in front of my dad.
    “alright , you guys should get well along with each other, just make yourself at home Yangyang., you can call him “ Dude” , just like your elder brother. My dad says , in a very commander-speaking way..

    Le yang is a very good boy, nodding and smiling , “ hi Dude”. ,hearing that , I don’t know why I suddenly feel so regretful, if only she is a beautiful girll, I could show her around my buddies…..

    “oh ,,,,,Yang…..yangyang ” I replied nervously. My dad leaves with a satisfied smile to help mum do with the dinner stuff, leaving me and my cousin in that living room ( sort of awkward)

    “ hey why do you guys just stand there? Come and get ready for the dinner.” Thanks to my mum’s breaking this embarrassing occasion.i quickly go up to take the dishes from my dad’s hands.

    Dad looks at me surprisingly “ oh ,boy, I seldom see you touch these dinner stuff.”
    “dad , you see , our cousin is here……I have to show my hospitality “ I answered grinning cheekily…
    Le yang just stands beside the table, still keeping the smile to us…

    to be continued ..
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    Aug 05, 2010 9:09 PM GMT
    Can we just wait until you get this published I don't like waiting for chaptersicon_rolleyes.gif
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    Aug 05, 2010 9:45 PM GMT
    Space_Cowboy_89 saidCan we just wait until you get this published I don't like waiting for chaptersicon_rolleyes.gif
    Just go to his profile and drool over his pics while you wait. It's a fun way to kill time. icon_biggrin.gif

    PS. So far the story is great. I'm also waiting for the rest...
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    Aug 05, 2010 9:46 PM GMT
    paulflexes said
    Space_Cowboy_89 saidCan we just wait until you get this published I don't like waiting for chaptersicon_rolleyes.gif
    Just go to his profile and drool over his pics while you wait. It's a fun way to kill time. icon_biggrin.gif

    PS. So far the story is great. I'm also waiting for the rest...



    lol um we play the same position (bottom) I think I'll be okay
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    Aug 05, 2010 9:49 PM GMT
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    paulflexes said
    Space_Cowboy_89 saidCan we just wait until you get this published I don't like waiting for chaptersicon_rolleyes.gif
    Just go to his profile and drool over his pics while you wait. It's a fun way to kill time. icon_biggrin.gif

    PS. So far the story is great. I'm also waiting for the rest...



    lol um we play the same position (bottom) I think I'll be okay
    You can still drool. icon_razz.gif
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    Aug 06, 2010 3:32 AM GMT
    Space_Cowboy_89 saidCan we just wait until you get this published I don't like waiting for chaptersicon_rolleyes.gif



    i understand how painful waiting is ... but i cant make it publish in a short time ( excuse my poor english ) and i am not sure i can do this work everyday ... but i will try to update as much as i can every day!!~~ hope you will continue posting your feedback.. thank you a lot !!icon_smile.gif
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    Space_Cowboy_89 saidCan we just wait until you get this published I don't like waiting for chaptersicon_rolleyes.gif
    Just go to his profile and drool over his pics while you wait. It's a fun way to kill time. icon_biggrin.gif

    PS. So far the story is great. I'm also waiting for the rest...


    thx , paul.. i will go on ...icon_biggrin.gif
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    Aug 06, 2010 3:33 AM GMT
    “come on, Yangyang ,sit here, just make yourself at home, once your dude (me) treats you bad, just tell me,” Timely insertion of the words from this “ kind” mum…….all I can say is that mid-aged women is always easily captured by beautiful boys. You couldn’t imagine how unwilling she was two nights ago, but today she totally changes ..preparing a lot of delicious food.
    “my dear mum, you cant destroy my image in front of my younger cousin, how can I be a elder brother in the future??” I protest.

    “ what ?? you wanna be a elder brother? Well, tell me how to make your image nicer?” oh , gosh ,what a woman’s mouth…super talkative.. I make a face to Yangyang, lol, he smiles ,with these white teeth, what a beautiful boy…..

    He looks less stiff from his face, “ when I was at home in Dongbei, my mum use to tell me you are a talented guy with excellent study.”

    “ ha-ha, that is just his luck, he never comes home during summer vacation, if he is not in shanghai , how can he get admitted to key universities….” Oh my dad with that serious face always regards me as a failure, continuing to chat to my younger cousin, “ I heard your school performance is very impressive ,you wanna learn medicine , right?”

    “well” le yang nodded,” I am influenced by my dad’s disease, and my mum hopes me to do so as well.”

    I learnt that my aunt was working as a nurse in a hospital in Qiqihaer,(a city in Dongbei) and then she met my cousin’s dad, who had the risk of heart disease. It is the power of love that made them get married , and his dad even stopped the relationship with his parents. Anyway they lived together very happily, when le yang was 6, his dad passed away,( my cousin’s life is not that easy, he must suffered a lot)

    “ your mum still works there ,doesn’t she?” my mum asked.
    “ yes, I grew up with her at that hospital, I guess that is why I have feelings for hospital, and wanna work there..” cousin eats the food gentely, and my mum keeps adding food to his bowl…..( oh mama..stop….. the rice has been out of the sight)…

    “ oh no, I hate that smell of disinfectant in the hospital. Every time I go there I always feel sick…” I replied, at the same time I show my bowl to mum, wanting her to add some food for me too.. but I am rejected by the cold chopsticks..( o(╯□╰)o。 same people with different fate…. )

    “ come on, how many times have you been to hospital ???? such a strong guy is afraid of getting injections.. ha-ha ,how pathetic …” my mum starts to make fun of me again.. Le yang turns to look at me with a sympathetic smile.. ( oh gosh …my brilliant image…is just ruined by this mid-aged woman’s mouth) …

    “how are your grandparents ? “ my dad asked.
    “ not quite well. Grandpa had a stroke two years ago, has been lying in bed, grandma legs are not good, they have no other children, they are all taken care of my mother.” my cousin answered.

    “ oh。。well. “ dad takes a deep breath..” your mum is very hard. so you have to study hard and will help her to share a little. and when she is older, get her back to Shanghai, after all, it is her home here."
    Le Yang nodded, and we eat our own food . For a time, we actually were a little quiet.

    to be continued
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    Aug 06, 2010 10:46 AM GMT
    Chapter3
    At night, Le yang is tiding up his stuff, and I am playing the computer games, taking several looks at him at times. Seeing from my angel, the orange light shines on his body , making him look so sexy and cute…..No word can describe how beautiful he looks at that moment .. what a pity , he is just a boy …

    He is putting his books from the luggage on my desk. And then he raises his head ,looking at the inner layers above the desk, where all of my books are put..

    “ dude, let me make your books in a good order, ok?” he turns back to ask me.
    “No, it is fine, just let it be. i am quite used to tidy things.”

    He smiles again , no more other words, starting to tidy up my books. He stands on tiptoe to reach the first inner layer, which is a little bit higher.
    I stop the game and go to help him,“ they are too disorderly to see, aren’t they?” I take the thick heavy book from his hand ,and at the advantage of being higher than him, I easily put the book on the top layer.

    When he turns back to look at me , my arms are open . it seems like he is hugged by me …oh god , this sucks( I was thinking)
    I quickly take 2 steps leftwards, pretending to look at his books..” oh you study physics?? So many physics books h here “

    “yes , dude , what did you study ??”
    “ same, I am kinda good at it ..i can help u with that before I forget them all.”
    “ awesome , that would be great ,I have been always wanting a family teacher to help me.” He replies and smiles.
    “ ok , no problem , it is on me.” I clap his shoulder in a manly way.

    That night I unexpectedly go to bed before 11:00pm. And my cousin snores from my upper bed because of tiredness all day I guess.

    Looking at that bedplate….my mood seems to be better than I thought two days ago, I even think it is quite funny to have the other person sharing the room. Anyway , he is not annoying , besides he’s got a nice name, Le yang, I feel happy to live with him….lol O(∩_∩)O~

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    Aug 06, 2010 12:26 PM GMT
    Second day, I am waked by the terrible noise of my mum, “ look at Le yang, who gets up so early , and helps me with the breakfast….look at you…so lazy ,,like a pig..” I just want to stretch myself with the sleepy eyes, my mum has come to pull my sleeping blanket.

    “what time?” I 100% unwillingly glanced at her.
    From my mum’s back walks in Le yang, answer me “ 9:30 am”
    “oh ,just 9:30, too early, let me sleep longer.” I get my blanket back , but still finally I am pulled up by my WILD mum…
    “ be quick! Get up! You gotta take him out to look around . Le yang hasn’t come here before, you need accompany him.”
    “ ok , fine….” I answer without opening my eyes… sitting on the bed….totally not awake.

    “ It doesn’t matter , aunt ( refer to my mum), we have chances in the future.” Said by Le yang in a very energetic tone.
    I look up my head, oh ,,he is quite active today, wearing a white round neck T shirt, making him look refresh. And the sunlight comes through the window, he looks quite handsome ,different from last night’s beauty( under that orange light)…

    He makes me totally awake…(oh man ,, I am such a person in good-looking). So I dress up , finish breakfast, take the money given by mum. After she nags repeatedly , “ be careful outside….” , I grab my cousin’s hand and escape from the house quickly …..


    to be continued..and welcome your replies...
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    Aug 06, 2010 12:58 PM GMT
    Danlees,
    Your story is great. I am really enjoying it. Please continue soon. icon_biggrin.gif
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    Aug 07, 2010 5:17 AM GMT
    Geoedward saidDanlees,
    Your story is great. I am really enjoying it. Please continue soon. icon_biggrin.gif


    thanks 4 for your support, i will update soon..~~icon_biggrin.gif
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    Aug 07, 2010 5:19 AM GMT
    Chapter 4

    Although Shanghai is a downtown city, I hardly can tell where to visit , living here for almost 20years… Bund? (i am sure you have watched a lot about it on TV), Temple? ( maybe foreign people would be interested in it, and don’t do shopping there , the goods there are not in good quality…) Huaihai Road? That isn’t suitable for two men walking there, but women.

    After a long-time thinking over, I still decide to take him to visit those places above ,as a mission, but Le yang feels delighted about it, and often asks me which country’s style the construction is, when was it built…. I am almost driven by those questions, but luckily my major is construction, , so my professional explanation makes him admire me so much.

    I cant help taking the ferry ride with him, When he saw the tricycle is on the boat, his surprised expressions make him look like a child. He picks a position near the side, with hands leaning on the railing , river wind blowing his hair up, exposing a smooth and beautiful forehead. I noticed that several girls nearby takes some glances at us.

    “ Dude, is this the Huangpu river?” he asks.
    “ well , how does it look? Like a drainage ditch ,hum? It cant be compared to your Songhua river anyway.”
    “how come?” he smiles ,” it looks like Guilinggao ( a kind of medicine with the dark color)”

    I am kind of speechless upon hearing that.. but seeing that river waves of muddy black water….it is really like a spoonful of Guilinggao…. ( How creative his thought is….)

    We take a round trip from Pudong to Shiliupu,. He is still in a excited mood….with horn of the ship , we are slowly approaching the buildings across opposite to us.( What a beautiful view under the sunshine )….

    “ next time I will bring you here again at night , all the lights are on~ like the castle in the fairy tale”, ( oh when do I become so girly and naïve…)
    Le Yang is pleased to put up the little finger, “ realy?? Deal!!~~” I am surprised by his actions…kidding me.. how can a 180cm man pull the hook stuff in public??

    Probably understanding my embarrassment, Le Yang take his hand back, continuing to see the landscape. “ Dude, you know, my mum misses shanghai so much, She often mentioned here. When grandparents are not around , she ften chat with me in shanghainese…”

    I nod , understanding the educated youths( referring to his mum’s generation) are alike. even if live in other places, shanghai is still in their dreams . “actually, paternal aunt she may also come back, grandfather should have this ability now, moreover that matter has gone away for a long time. Anyhow , we are still a family”

    Le yang shakes his head, smiles a little bitterly and astringently, “ my mun has a lot to burden with,” at that time , le yang makes me feel time goes so fast..i suddently pull his little finger to hook despite that embarrassment, “ next time, I promise I will show you around shanghai and with your mum!!”
    He is kinda shocked by my action, smiling again with those two big eyes. Giving me a big nod…..(the sunlight is really beautiful)…

    here is Huangpu river
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    here is Songhua river
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    this is that medicine Guilinggao
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    to be continued...and your replies are welcomed ..
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    Aug 07, 2010 5:31 AM GMT
    this is Bund
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    This is Temple
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    This is Huaihai Road
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    Aug 07, 2010 6:07 AM GMT
    Great story!! Im hooked!! icon_biggrin.gif
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    Aug 07, 2010 8:10 AM GMT
    Crucializer saidGreat story!! Im hooked!! icon_biggrin.gif


    glad to hear u like it ~~~ icon_smile.gif
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    Aug 08, 2010 5:49 AM GMT
    It is getting late ,when we come to Huaihai road. We should have come home, since we all enjoy it . why not continue to visit?
    It is kinda fuggy at night in Shanghai during summer. But slight breeze blows, it is quite comfortable

    All kinds of Lights are on, phoenix trees stand roadsides romantically. Well-dressed men and women, leisurely wander, or walk quickly.. from time to time, there is a lane appearing .. many old people relax in Nongtang, this is the unique view of Shanghai…

    After a moment, we go to a whole new world---- famous Pub groups…..where two or three young people pass together…and deafening music comes out from those crazy pubs..
    “wanna drink inside?|” I ask.( in fact I don’t quite come here )
    Le Yang shakes his head,without hesitation,” No , no thanks . ”.
    I nodded and said,” yes , you are still 18-…..when u grow up older ,I wil bring in .”He bows his head, smiling..Across the street is a ice cream truck, so I tap Le yang,” I ‘l get the ice cream, wait here.”

    Holding two ice creams, I am about to cross the street, and see a middle-aged man talking to my cousin, and that man is pointing a car nearby----BMW.. Le yang soon draws backwards two steps , shaking his head..
    I hurry to him, “ what’s the matter?”that middle age man ‘s face is frivolous, “ oh you guys are together , then go to join us..” he says and stretches out 5 fingers.

    F**K , he thought us as money boys….i am just about to beat him, Le yang .stops me.
    Fine, I endure, for the sake of my cousin, “ gentleman, you made a mistake…” I reply and stare at this petty old man.
    “ OH “ he answers surprisingly, “ sorry, he is yours….”, touching Le yang’s face frivolously… “ enjoy yourselves..” and turns back to leave. Le yang’s face soon turns red..

    “SH*T!!!” I cant control myself any more, grabbing the ice cream and throwing it to the JERKass.. He turns around , cleans the ice cream on his shirt. Angrily showing the gate security guard to teach me a lesson. They all come to me as dogs receiving the master’s order.. one of them clutches my collar, and several heavy fists are punched to my stomach.

    I sorely take some breath.. because, my whole body is controlled by the guard , I cant let my strength out. I glance at Le yang with scared pale face,, who is trying to come up to get me out .But that old man prevents him…and saying , “ so beautiful guy , why not sell your body….what a pity.”
    Many pedestrians have stopped to watch this fight , but no one dares to stop the fight..

    Looking at that Bitch,I am at the point of blasting..
    With all of my power, I finally get out the control ,and give a fist to that old fucking bitch.. just want to pull up Le yang, feel some warm liquid flows from my ear , and then I lose any strength and get faint….


    to be continued and welcome your REPLIES.... Thank you !!~
  • Crucializer

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    Aug 08, 2010 6:05 AM GMT
    wow - didnt see that coming! :-)