My FIRST SINGLE...."TEASE" check it out guys, what do you think?

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    Dec 02, 2010 10:34 PM GMT
    Hey guys! sooo this is my FIRST single, it's called "TEASE" about 8 months ago I posted a thread featuring a demo to this song and had you guys comment on it and tell me what you thought! got some great feedback and also some great constructive criticism. So I took the song back to the studio reworked it and NOW it is a more uptempo, dancier and catchier song! check it out! lemme know what you think! Being my first release, I am offering it as a FREE DOWNLOAD to all. The link to download the track is below the video. Also if you like the song, could you PLEASE be so kind and post a comment on the youtube page for the song, it'll help it gain more popularity and hopefully help me build a fan base. Once again, thank you sooo much for all your support! it is MUCH appreciated! so Listen to it! download it! share it! and DANCE YOUR ASS OFF TO IT!!! cheers boys! much love!

    Pawan aka crazycool



    http://www.zshare.net/audio/83418626d464c35f/
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    Dec 02, 2010 10:54 PM GMT
    This is extremely well done! Great bass, great beat, great voice. So good that I SERIOUSLY think you should do a high-quality music video with you lip-syncing the song. Use similar locations like when you shot your stills.

    Put that on Youtube and you will definitely create a fan base. I guarantee it.

    Also, I like the urban version:

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    Dec 03, 2010 12:37 AM GMT
    Thanks dude! the urban mix was actually the version I posted 8 months ago haha glad you like it! cheers!
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    Dec 03, 2010 2:41 AM GMT
    dude NICE!

    u made some really smart alterations from the origonal demo one

    HOT!
  • Ironman4U

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    Dec 03, 2010 2:52 AM GMT
    Great job...good beat, lyrics, voice. Great that you are following your passion. You have a gift.

    I think you could get plenty of RJ volunteers to play the "Teaser" in the video. Could even use a number of guys as they pass you and "connect" with a glance as they keep walking by, but with one MAIN tease that is prominent throughout the video. Auditions?
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    Dec 03, 2010 3:14 AM GMT
    Thanks guys! I'm currently putting together an electronic press kit to shop to record labels, and if I get any offers and possibly signed THEN I'll put together a video for this track with only the Sexiest men! icon_razz.gif haha!
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    Dec 03, 2010 3:29 AM GMT
    crazycool saidThanks guys! I'm currently putting together an electronic press kit to shop to record labels, and if I get any offers and possibly signed THEN I'll put together a video for this track with only the Sexiest men! icon_razz.gif haha!
    You should record most of the footage anyway and selects the cuts you want for the video. That'll save LOTS of time when you're ready to put it all together. icon_wink.gif
  • austinlee

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    Dec 03, 2010 5:01 AM GMT
    I like the new Enriquez song " Tonight I am F*** you" lol on itune
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    Dec 03, 2010 5:40 AM GMT


    Real GREAT! Crap, there's a lot of talented guys on RJ.

    -Doug

    That was pretty amazing!
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    Dec 03, 2010 6:48 AM GMT
    Thanks guys! I'm gonna be peforming TEASE live this saturday so I'll post a video of the performance if I don't screw up! hahaha
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    Dec 03, 2010 7:01 AM GMT
    I recently had the misfortune of having a friend force me to listen to one of those Bravo housewives songs called, I believe, "google me." If she is famous, you should be winning grammys... that's all.
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    Dec 03, 2010 7:16 AM GMT
    Very professional , great voice , great mix .... like both versions ..icon_biggrin.gif
  • mizu5

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    Dec 03, 2010 7:19 AM GMT
    crazycool saidThanks guys! I'm gonna be peforming TEASE live this saturday so I'll post a video of the performance if I don't screw up! hahaha
    Where at? Statlers? icon_razz.gif
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    Dec 03, 2010 10:44 AM GMT
    Can't wait to see the live performance! Hot song, man. I love it!
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    Dec 03, 2010 1:27 PM GMT
    Handsome, well built AND a talented singer?


    Marry me? icon_lol.gif


    Seriously, though. You need representation and a contract. If Justin Beaver can make it big, you oughta be selling Platinum!!
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    Dec 03, 2010 1:42 PM GMT
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    crazycool saidThanks guys! I'm gonna be peforming TEASE live this saturday so I'll post a video of the performance if I don't screw up! hahaha
    Where at? Statlers? icon_razz.gif



    LOL hell to the no! I'll be performing at Woody's, the performance is during the day however so not during the Best Ass Contest sat night hahaha its during a fundraiser for the baseball league and there is also a food drive going on.
  • SoCalMark

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    Dec 03, 2010 4:29 PM GMT
    I can tell you took time to rework this and I feel the changes are really positive. I think the single is very solid. The vocals are really clean and I feel they match the music and the music match the vocals in a much more synergistic way. Talent is also measured by taking peoples feedback and creating something amazing. I know Alshley Judd's fellow acting students in LA had a bet with the professor how long she would last because she was so horrible. But by the end of the year, she was one of the best students, because her professor said she took everyone's feedback and implemented into her craft better then anyone he had ever seen.
    I use to work in NYC at RCA records for a time and also worked in recording studios where Aaliyah and many others recorded. If I were to hear a dance verison I think the dynamic of Lady Gaga's Alejandro is one of the best examples in years of how drastically different a song should sound when its turned into a dance song. I wish you all the luck in the world! Keep us posted!icon_biggrin.gif
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    Dec 03, 2010 5:34 PM GMT
    thanks for all your kind words and support guys! much appreciated really! i want to make out with you all! LOL icon_razz.gif
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    Dec 03, 2010 5:44 PM GMT
    crazycool saidthanks for all your kind words and support guys! much appreciated really! i want to make out with you all! LOL icon_razz.gif



    I'm sure a lot of RJ guys would take you up on that!icon_wink.gif

    I'll say it again - I love the song. Its crazycoolgood!
  • vindog

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    Dec 03, 2010 6:12 PM GMT


    Well done. I have to say it's nice to hear a gay man make a track with a broken beat. Seems most go directly for the house/trance four-on-the-floor beats.

    Not exactly my cup of tea, but really well done.
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    Dec 03, 2010 6:25 PM GMT
    crazycool said
    mizu5 said
    crazycool saidThanks guys! I'm gonna be peforming TEASE live this saturday so I'll post a video of the performance if I don't screw up! hahaha
    Where at? Statlers? icon_razz.gif



    LOL hell to the no! I'll be performing at Woody's, the performance is during the day however so not during the Best Ass Contest sat night hahaha its during a fundraiser for the baseball league and there is also a food drive going on.
    Ahaha here i was hoping some older man would be picking at the keys lsitlessly as you belted. Darn.

    And You mean you WON'T sing while lowering your pants for the crowds approval? Woody's seems o much less fun now icon_lol.gif
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    Dec 03, 2010 7:28 PM GMT
    mizu5 said
    crazycool said
    mizu5 said
    crazycool saidThanks guys! I'm gonna be peforming TEASE live this saturday so I'll post a video of the performance if I don't screw up! hahaha
    Where at? Statlers? icon_razz.gif



    LOL hell to the no! I'll be performing at Woody's, the performance is during the day however so not during the Best Ass Contest sat night hahaha its during a fundraiser for the baseball league and there is also a food drive going on.
    Ahaha here i was hoping some older man would be picking at the keys lsitlessly as you belted. Darn.

    And You mean you WON'T sing while lowering your pants for the crowds approval? Woody's seems o much less fun now icon_lol.gif



    haha no I won't! i like to think I'm the classy type ;) haha have a great weekend man!
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    Dec 04, 2010 5:13 AM GMT
    SoCalMark saidI can tell you took time to rework this and I feel the changes are really positive. I think the single is very solid. The vocals are really clean and I feel they match the music and the music match the vocals in a much more synergistic way. Talent is also measured by taking peoples feedback and creating something amazing. I know Alshley Judd's fellow acting students in LA had a bet with the professor how long she would last because she was so horrible. But by the end of the year, she was one of the best students, because her professor said she took everyone's feedback and implemented into her craft better then anyone he had ever seen.
    I use to work in NYC at RCA records for a time and also worked in recording studios where Aaliyah and many others recorded. If I were to hear a dance verison I think the dynamic of Lady Gaga's Alejandro is one of the best examples in years of how drastically different a song should sound when its turned into a dance song. I wish you all the luck in the world! Keep us posted!icon_biggrin.gif



    thanks bud! constructive criticism is very important and should always be evaluated so I'm really glad the song turned out to be much better in the end!
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    Dec 04, 2010 6:04 AM GMT
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    JoeB1986 saidI recently had the misfortune of having a friend force me to listen to one of those Bravo housewives songs called, I believe, "google me." If she is famous, you should be winning grammys... that's all.


    That would be Kim Zolciak, lol, her voice sucks but her songs are catchy and @crazycool I'm gonna be honest at first I thought it was gonna suck LOL but IMO it's actually really good!!! Like REALLY REALLY good!icon_biggrin.gif



    Thanks babe! now download that FREE track and play it at your next christmas party or sat night pregame before heading out to do horrible things! icon_razz.gif
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    Dec 04, 2010 6:25 AM GMT
    It is definitely not my type of music, but I have to say I was quite impressed with your talent, especially after seeing your Dailymotion name was chiropopstar and me getting all judgmental thinking, "What could a chiropractor know about music?" Good job. Your talent is going to take you places.