Need feedback on some work! Choose which design you like best!

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    Jan 09, 2012 4:41 AM GMT
    It's a contest for Target, for the best design to be displayed as artwork on a wall. I really hope I win, so I'm hoping you pick mine but yeah... Decide away!

    First.

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    Second.

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    Third.

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    Fourth.

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    Fifth.

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    Sixth.

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    Seventh.

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    Jan 09, 2012 4:47 AM GMT
    Very good work. I like the first one, and the sixth one. Though I think you should make the font for "Pasadena" larger...icon_biggrin.gif
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    Jan 09, 2012 4:52 AM GMT
    Mines neither icon_sad.gif Oh well.
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    Jan 09, 2012 4:54 AM GMT
    Kristoff saidIt's a contest for Target, for the best design to be displayed as artwork on a wall. I really hope I win, so I'm hoping you pick mine but yeah... Decide away!
    Seventh.

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    I like this one because it reminds me of that "wish you were here" postcard you'd send to a special someone.
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    Jan 09, 2012 4:58 AM GMT
    2nd one in my opinion.
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    Jan 09, 2012 4:59 AM GMT
    Haha, yeah. I'm totes not winning. Oh well icon_sad.gif
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    Jan 09, 2012 5:02 AM GMT
    Mines number 6, but I agree... The last one will definitely win icon_sad.gif Oh well.
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    Jan 09, 2012 5:03 AM GMT
    [quote][cite]Kristoff said[/cite]
    Third.

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    God help you if its this one, because this reminds me of this...

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    Jan 09, 2012 5:04 AM GMT
    I like sixth best, but I knew Pasadena pretty well, and I don't associate it with surfing. Seventh is my choice. Good luck!
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    Jan 09, 2012 5:34 AM GMT
    antelope saidI like sixth best, but I knew Pasadena pretty well, and I don't associate it with surfing. Seventh is my choice. Good luck!


    You mean Pasadena in South Australia yeah?
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    Jan 09, 2012 5:53 AM GMT
    I like the second and sixth best.
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    Jan 09, 2012 5:56 AM GMT
    Awww thanks.
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    Jan 09, 2012 7:53 AM GMT
    The first one is JAWSOME.
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    Jan 09, 2012 9:28 PM GMT
    The second and third one just reminds me too much of Hitler. The sixth one in my opinion is the best looking, but it also reminds me of the Japanese war flag, the rising sun flag.

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    I pick sixth.
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    Jan 09, 2012 9:29 PM GMT
    Sixth is the best as far as my eye can tell!
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    Jan 09, 2012 9:35 PM GMT
    1st and 6th.
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    Jan 09, 2012 9:47 PM GMT
    First and seventh.

    First because it features products and is bound to solicit want, seventh because it glamorizes consumer lifestyle.

    Great work.
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    Jan 10, 2012 9:09 AM GMT
    I didn't win icon_sad.gif The seventh did, oh well. I was close.
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    Jan 10, 2012 9:16 AM GMT
    I liked the 2nd one and the 7th. Better luck next time! At least you didn't do the first one-too much stuff going on to be an effective ad or cool art work.
    Change your body type- U r not overweight!!!! I'd say slim or thin in your bod pic.
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    Jan 10, 2012 9:21 AM GMT
    Kristoff saidI didn't win icon_sad.gif The seventh did, oh well. I was close.
    I really liked your design but the only thing I would of done differently is made it less personal on the people in the pic. More shadows and less specifics. Btw amazing job this is really impressive.
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    Jan 10, 2012 9:40 AM GMT
    It was hard for me.

    I liked 2 and 6.

    I think 6 got the majority of votes...
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    Jan 14, 2012 10:33 AM GMT
    1 and 2 looks like they were ripped from istockphotos.com

    good luck, when will you know?
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    Jan 14, 2012 10:37 AM GMT
    #1 for sure. Great work, man.
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    Jan 14, 2012 2:46 PM GMT
    ChangeofName said[quote][cite]Kristoff said[/cite]
    Third.

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    God help you if its this one, because this reminds me of this...

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    Thats the first thing I though of when I saw that " Ummmm the Jewish population wont be shopping there now".... And Im not even Jewish icon_eek.gificon_cool.gif



    Number 6 would be my choice
  • coolarmydude

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    Jan 14, 2012 2:58 PM GMT
    Kristoff said
    Sixth.

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    Seventh.

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    I like these two the best. The sixth gives a very casual sense to the viewer and the seventh is very stylish.