Song of my songs

  • free_mind12

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    Apr 29, 2012 7:30 AM GMT
    Song of My Songs

    Were you not the mightiest giant
    or the withering worm
    the callous snowbird
    or the muddiest storm
    were you not the gentle stream
    or the honeybees
    the hopeless romantic
    or the calming surge
    were you the smiling buddha
    or just the cunning trickster
    eyes wide with passion
    lips of smelted wisdom
    intoning cruel intentions
    or were you just a passing drop
    in a vast and lonesome landscape
    maybe, or just maybe
    you were so much more
    but never someone else
    other than the song of my songs

    By ME JRS
  • free_mind12

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    Apr 29, 2012 8:40 PM GMT
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    I think it's very good. I find layers of meaning in it.

    -Doug
  • free_mind12

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    Apr 30, 2012 11:00 PM GMT
    meninlove said
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    I think it's very good. I find layers of meaning in it.

    -Doug

    why thank you
  • free_mind12

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    Apr 30, 2012 11:02 PM GMT
    Any one else?