my poetry

  • aj101

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    Jun 18, 2012 6:12 AM GMT
    Well.... I tend to write poetry every now and then. Due to some requests by people i have decided to create a thread that will have me posting my insanely sappy poems that i write. Any kind of thoughts are accepted. Also if you have your own poems go ahead and share them icon_smile.gif
  • aj101

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    Jun 18, 2012 6:12 AM GMT
    Heart beat lullaby

    Baby when I first met you
    You had my heart at hi
    Now I’m yours forever
    Till the day that I die
    No matter how far I go
    I am always close by
    No matter where I am
    I’m there it’s no lie
    But don't look out your window,
    Don’t seek me in the skies.
    Put your hand upon your chest
    And baby close your eyes.
    As long as your heart shall beat
    Mine shall coincide
    Go on go to sleep
    Like I’m there by your side
    And remember that I love you
    You’re my hope, my life, my pride
    and baby let me be
    your heart beat lullaby
  • aj101

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    Jun 18, 2012 6:12 AM GMT
    Sit and wonder

    I sit her wondering
    When you will step into my life
    A dream among dreams
    A love among strife
    Find me soon find me now
    Fill my heart with your vows
    I sit here wondering
    When you will show
    Sweep me off my feet
    Your love on me bestow
    Find me please find me soon
    Let my heart be yours to swoon
    I will wait for you
    I will live for you
    I hope for you
    I pray for you
    Oh how I want to love you
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    Jun 18, 2012 6:18 AM GMT
    put some beats to these they could be songs
  • mizu5

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    Jun 18, 2012 6:18 AM GMT
    I really do like it. <3
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    Jun 18, 2012 6:19 AM GMT
    @Heart Beat Lullaby: Really nice poem, it's sweet and cute. The guy that you wrote it for will definitely love it and it'll have him hooked for more from you.

    @Sit & Wonder: Like I said before, it reminds me of a guy I had a huge crush on that wasn't reciprocated (he was straight icon_evil.gif )

    They really get me to feel something, I really like them.
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    Jun 18, 2012 6:20 AM GMT
    Love them both.
  • aj101

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    Jun 18, 2012 6:21 AM GMT
    awwww you guys actually came and posted on my thread
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    Jun 18, 2012 6:29 AM GMT
    afaviation101 saidawwww you guys actually came and posted on my thread


    I know what it feels like to want some feedback and well it's well deserved, they were good poems. Hope you post some more down the line.
  • aj101

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    Jun 18, 2012 6:49 AM GMT
    Here is my newest one, dont know what i think of it



    I thought that this would never happen
    A smile so bright I see nothing else
    A touch that I crave more of
    A laugh that fills the world
    A person that I love
    I thought this would never happen
    My heart had been closed
    Beaten and broken
    Love a myth
    Words never to be spoken
    You came into my life
    So unexpected and unplanned
    Gave breath to my soul
    A foundation to stand
    I thought that this would never happen
    A smile so bright I see nothing else
    A touch that I crave more of
    A laugh that fills the world
    A person that I love
    I thought this would never happen
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    Jun 18, 2012 6:52 AM GMT
    I like the new one, too. Reminds me of some of the ones I've written. Great work.

    so, the threesome didn't inspire another one? icon_razz.gif
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    Jun 18, 2012 6:52 AM GMT
    You just wrote it? It sounds like you found your man lol. That one made me feel happy, like finally something good has happened after all that waiting.
  • aj101

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    Jun 18, 2012 6:53 AM GMT
    Haha no i didnt just write it, i found it after searching for it
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    Jun 18, 2012 7:03 AM GMT
    afaviation101 saidHaha no i didnt just write it, i found it after searching for it


    Oh lol, oops. I can't believe you wrote all of this and don't have a guy that it was meant for with you right now. You can tell you put a lot of yourself into them.
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    Jun 18, 2012 7:18 AM GMT
    Poetry is dumb
    And sounds all stupid
    When some fucking loser
    Think he's cupid.
  • Karl

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    Jun 18, 2012 8:26 AM GMT
    I love this af icon_wink.gif
    Im looking forward to reading more icon_twisted.gif
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    Jun 18, 2012 1:12 PM GMT
    nice to see you have the balls put these thnigs on the forums... keep it up