This song won me second prize in a song writing contest.

  • prototype

    Posts: 194

    Jul 25, 2012 11:21 PM GMT
    So I wrote this song a while ago and got some feedback on it. Turns out the feedback was about $200 and meeting a producer. Sometimes you gotta embrace the fear to find out what you can really do! Haha.

    This is called When.





    When
    (0:56)
    And as you tell me we can become timeless in the oceans of each other’s eyes, I embrace.
    We have built purity and significance and they dance on the scent of our skin, they’ve played in the fire.
    No one is built to hide tonight, until the locks on the door turn and crushes this world of ours.

    (1:46)
    When the stars die and bury the wishes, your words will become real.
    Until then, I say goodbye to the world that is yours.

    (2:05)
    I have dug a hole, deep enough to withstand the change in time. Will you trust it?
    This heart, it still beats to the dance formed on the river on a moonlight night, unarmed.

    (2:39)
    Give me the heart; place it in a shadow for another day.
    When you come to find me, please let it guide you.

    (3:37)
    When your world collapse around you, don’t head for the sun, find the beat that will lead you back to me.
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    Jul 25, 2012 11:24 PM GMT
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    I like this.
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    Jul 26, 2012 12:17 AM GMT
    Congratulations!

    Good luck with your meeting!

    I am sure we all look forward to the time when we can say "We knew him when..."

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  • prototype

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    Jul 27, 2012 1:55 AM GMT
    Haha well thank you guys. It's all much appreciated!