The story goes like this...

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    Oct 24, 2008 7:59 PM GMT
    So I thought a "story" thread might be an interesting change.
    At least, I’ve never seen one before and if there has been then you’ll get the gist. If not...

    I'll start the opening Chapter and you attach the progression.
    Keep it to the origins of the story, meaning please refrain from deviating to some completely detached and bizarre direction - if that's possible. You can add humor, keep it serious, make it dark, make it light, add a character, kill one off – just refrain from including current “running for office candidates” dammitt!

    I thought it might be fun to give this a try...
    Since I’ll be out of town some of next week, I’ll miss seeing it develop, but go for it.

    The story starts like this.

    I woke up this morning with taste of last nights drinking still heavy on my breath. My eyes stinging with the harsh light of early morning and the realization that the guy I fucked was not nearly as hot this morning as he looked in the dimly lit bar last night.
    My head ached and I'd kill for aspirin. It was just about then when he came out of the bathroom.
    Not the guy from the dim lit bar but his room mate and he was fucking hot.
    I forgot all about the headache and watching his naked form come closer, found myself increasingly aroused. This guy from the bathroom, naked, toned and smiling, walked to the bed pulled, the sheets back and climbed on top of me. We kissed passionately, the warmth of his body covering mine. I laid back as he straddled my hips, feeling his thighs settle against mine just as my alarm went off.
    It was then I truly awoke to a dark room, my room and 5am.
    "Fuck" a wasted boner and another work day on tap.

    I threw the sheets back, walked to the shower, stripped off my boxers and climbed in. The warm water pelted my skin, relaxing, refreshing and slowly waking me even more. I tilted my head back in to the spray and just then heard the ‘click’ open of the shower door and the cool rush of the "outside" air. I heard another click and then a sudden BANG!!!....
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    Oct 24, 2008 8:04 PM GMT
    In walks a naked John McCain at half mast!

    J/K. Couldn't resist.
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    Oct 24, 2008 8:06 PM GMT
    ruck_us saidIn walks a naked John McCain at half mast!

    J/K. Couldn't resist.


    May the next man you meet and take home have a vagina icon_eek.gif

    I knew some one would and soon...
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  • Delivis

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    Oct 24, 2008 8:10 PM GMT
    Was the bang a gun shot or a violent sudden ejaculation?
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    Oct 24, 2008 8:15 PM GMT
    yep you flunked
    apparently this is just too difficult and requires to much creativity.

    We should just stick with 'who's hot/who's not' and 'Obama is like a rose on a winter day' threads.

    And who knew Ruk_us envisions McCain with a semi at his shower door...
    Now there's a visual icon_eek.gif
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    Oct 24, 2008 8:21 PM GMT
    BodyWork4 saidyep you flunked
    apparently this is just too difficult and requires to much creativity.

    We should just stick with 'who's hot/who's not' and 'Obama is like a rose on a winter day' threads.

    And who knew Ruk_us envisions McCain with a semi at his shower door...
    Now there's a visual icon_eek.gif


    Mmm, that's hot.

    OK, here's my contribution to the continuing saga:

    It's the roommate! How in the hell did he get in? For that matter, how did he know where I live? Was I so drunk that I completely forgot that he brought me home after I passed out on their cold, hard tile floor?

    My mind races, my pulse quickens. Does he want me, or does he just need to wash off the vomit I spewed on him while he carried me up the stairs? I look down, and there it is: His donkey kong cock is semi-erect, and it pulses as it becomes harder and more erect. I back up and brace myself against the wall, and he accepts my implicit invitation to make a move on me. He's grinning mischievously as he presses me hard against the Travertine tile. I feel his beefy cock rub against my thigh, and in a flash, I am hard as a rock, hardly noticing the cool water cascading down my back while caressing my eager manhole. He chuckles...
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    Oct 24, 2008 8:56 PM GMT
    I still think microwaves are bad for you icon_confused.gif
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    Oct 25, 2008 4:52 PM GMT
    Continuing..............He chuckles, grinning because he surprised me - he sees the look of half terror / half lustful anticipation on my face - as he enters my shower - coming toward me - I'm backed up against the shower wall - growing hard as steel. He notices - and comes in for a long, passionate kiss, saying, "So - you're hard again - amazing - after the bed pounding we gave you last night!" I'm thinking - "We gave you..........?" I search my brain for a second about who the "we" might also include.

    I now remember that instead of going to his house after the party - we came to mine.....with his roommate, who was at the party with him. I'm wondering where the roommate is, then? Soon I find out - when the shower door opens again and closes with another bang - he doesn't want to be excluded from what we're about to do - as we move this party along - now with water. They both begin using loofahs on me - caressing me with every stroke. They turn me to face the wall -- my hands and arms held by one of the guys above me. I couldn't get away now - no matter what - but who'd want to escape? I feel someone's hot tongue rimming me - God how nice - and then one finger, slowly, longingly - and then two fingers. Someone is paying full attention to my balls now - while the other guy devours my cock - first the head - then the rest - what a deep throat! I'm in awe of these guys - and I have a new appreciation for parties of three. The next thing I feel is something hot, but oh man - way too thick - entering me!
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    Oct 14, 2012 3:28 PM GMT
    was it the shower nozzle?