I wrote this song about my drug addicted mother. Please be nice!

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    May 29, 2013 4:17 AM GMT
    "Frozen Heart"
    This comes from my heart.
    Mother why did you leave us ?
    When we needed you the most, why did your heart grow cold? My sister and I have suffered because of your cold heart,
    We were new born babies three days old.you said you loved us but you abandoned us. Mother (why oh why!)
    We have suffered for your sins and choices because of what you did. When you plunged that needle in to your vein.
    A piece of me died that day
    (I really nearly did)
    Now your a ghost to me.(for now)
    Now I have a hard working dad and mom too.
    I take a bullet for them I'll fight for them I would die for them. You'll never amount to my mom needle stabbed mother.
    your love is useless to me
    (I got all the love I need).
    For years I have looked for you.
    But I'm chasing a ghost
    looking for a needle stabbed frozen heart mother.
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    May 29, 2013 2:24 PM GMT
    Would be interested in hearing it to music. Do you record?
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    May 29, 2013 10:34 PM GMT
    gayinterest saidWould be interested in hearing it to music. Do you record?
    I was atually going to do that today icon_smile.gif
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    May 29, 2013 11:29 PM GMT
    Cool. If you want a producer, I'll be happy to work with you to get it polished.
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    May 30, 2013 2:43 AM GMT

    gayinterest saidCool. If you want a producer, I'll be happy to work with you to get it polished.
    OMG that would be so awesome how do I start?
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    May 30, 2013 10:14 PM GMT
    We'll work it out. Do you have a melody in mind to fit the lyrics?
    So you have a mic to record yourself?
    If so, do a recording, send it over to me, and I can work out a backing track. Tell me what sort of style you want it in.
    Then I can send you the backing track and you can rerecord the vocal again.
    Sound good?

    This is a melancholy song I wrote with a singer to give you an idea of what I can do.
    https://www.wetransfer.com/downloads/d93422bdedb9a873540955f703be558c20130530220757/9ad5cffb4a3cbbf36875e685b2fb579620130530220757/084160
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    May 30, 2013 11:41 PM GMT
    .I was going for sad piano slow drum beat melody with with a mournful guitar but in the happy parts I want to put in a fast paced beat then slow it down. I don't have anything to record with but I can maybe find a way toicon_lol.gif
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    May 31, 2013 12:08 AM GMT
    Katon_user said"Frozen Heart"
    If you poke it, will liquid blood squirt out?
    http://www.realjock.com/gayforums/3223195/
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    Jun 01, 2013 11:24 AM GMT
    paulflexes said
    Katon_user said"Frozen Heart"
    If you poke it, will liquid blood squirt out?
    http://www.realjock.com/gayforums/3223195/
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