Take off your clothes

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    Oct 11, 2009 3:48 AM GMT
    I wrote another poem on here a few months ago: http://www.realjock.com/gayforums/637910/

    Myself being single and all, I write when I'm...alone.

    I wanted to see what all of you thought of this one, cheers!

    Take Off Your Clothes

    Oh, how your kiss, it's inescapable!
    When lips, they do touch, it's insatiable!

    Senses with which I sense grow too intense.
    How far do I go, with pain so immense.

    To take hold of the feeling inside me,
    Of that rush as you brush your hand softly.

    I have not one word, but noise to utter.
    Where is it now, my lost tongue? Just stutters.

    Our Love becomes liquid warm, moist, and shared.
    It is what it is, for we, bodies bared.
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    Oct 14, 2009 8:18 PM GMT


    fancy and sensuous.

    me likes.

    relating some personal experience ?
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    Oct 14, 2009 8:25 PM GMT
    I like it icon_biggrin.gif