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Sort of reminds of the meaing of a scripture. Matt 7:6
I tried, experimented and learned a lesson.

Thanks.

i wouldnt worry about it too much

but i didn't read your novel so im not sure if that applies

ugh, I need more coffee.... What the hell are you talking about? I am confused

As my first fiction workshop teacher laid out on the first day of class, "Just because something happened in real life, doesn't mean it's believable when you tell it to someone else. Life is easy, fiction is hard."

Interesting read for sure. Though I do feel a little dirty now...

yikessss

OP is in Burbank, close to HOLLYWOOD!! Probably an aspiring screenplay writer testing for responses to a screenplay idea. I think it's clear why he's still aspiring.

Sparkycat saidOP is in Burbank, close to HOLLYWOOD!! Probably an aspiring screenplay writer testing for responses to a screenplay idea. I think it's clear why he's still aspiring.

I think you're spot on

Sparkycat saidOP is in Burbank, close to HOLLYWOOD!! Probably an aspiring screenplay writer testing for responses to a screenplay idea. I think it's clear why he's still aspiring.

Well give him some ammunition! He needs some test responses so he can fill in the blanks with the supporting characters' dialogue! The conversations he has with his friends about this true love have to have some substance, some voice... our voices.

Before I give you some, please be sure not to use it i more than 35% of the screenplay. Otherwise I get a writing credit.

calibro saidAs my first fiction workshop teacher laid out on the first day of class, "Just because something happened in real life, doesn't mean it's believable when you tell it to someone else. Life is easy, fiction is hard."

Hey - you wouldn't happen to know anyone by the name of Ament would you? Just asking.

I found your quote to be very true. Life is stranger than fiction.

Dave