I wrote and recorded my first song

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    Apr 08, 2010 11:48 PM GMT
    very rough, and my first attempt at any of this.
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    Apr 08, 2010 11:54 PM GMT
    Nice…could see it being put in a movie sound track…Love the slide show.
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    Apr 09, 2010 12:00 AM GMT
    Thanks. The slides I just through together real quick just so I can have a video to post. Workin on a lead guitar part, and another couple chorus'
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    Apr 09, 2010 12:02 AM GMT
    I think you should up the tempo.
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    Apr 09, 2010 12:07 AM GMT
    It's not an up-tempo song. It's about coming home from war
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    Apr 09, 2010 12:12 AM GMT
    I understood that and I'm not suggesting making it uptempo as in changing the mood, just the bpm. From a "do I want to listen to this" perspective, my mind says not unless it moves along a bit more. I think it would improve on this as a song, you've already got the sentiment.
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    Apr 09, 2010 12:15 AM GMT
    Thanks, I will see what it sounds like after I make an adjustment. I decided to play it backwards and thought it sounded pretty cool too haha
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    Apr 09, 2010 4:00 AM GMT
    Definitely could hear it in a movie. Very soulful, if that makes sense? I agree about maybe speeding up just a little?
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    Apr 09, 2010 4:17 AM GMT
    I agree with most. I can here it in a movie. Cleaning it up or recording it again could lose its edge. I don't know....I kind of like it as is.