good job- the saxophone bit is really a nice surprise- the vocal is pretty good, though i would say you definitely could have made it more your own. To add to the climactic feel after the sax solo, you could have gone to the upper registers of your voice, especially on "don't be afraid" - and taken perhaps a few more liberties with the melody. I would also watch the gasping breaths which are too high in your chest, and not enough in the diaphragm, which is why the breath support wasn't there throughout the entire performance. You also could have employed more dynamic range, exploration of tone color- and also made it more "show choir" theatrical - this is a "Glee" audiiton after all. You want to make a big impression! That being said, you are definitely a good-looking guy, and appear to be very gracious and generous in spirit. That comes across very clearly. Keep it up, and never give up on your musical dreams! Peace.