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    Jun 17, 2010 6:31 AM GMT
    Haha WELL!!!! I knew you'd open this thread! while you're here please check out my new song and lemme know what you think! Thanks guys! CHEERS!!!

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    Jun 17, 2010 6:33 AM GMT
    Oh and any negative, pointless comments please refrain and grow up! otherwise CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is always accepted icon_smile.gif
  • azureskyy20

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    Jun 17, 2010 8:06 AM GMT
    The moment you say "omg" it becomes a teeny-bopper song ;)
  • tajsreve

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    Jun 17, 2010 9:32 AM GMT
    Not sure if I agree with the OMG making it teeny bobber.. but what do I know. However, I think it is good, it just lacks commitment in your voice.. Meaning... maybe re-record it with someone who actually turns you on standing there to sing it to. Someone teasing you while your singing it. Just a thought! Hope that's not to negative.
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    Jun 17, 2010 1:26 PM GMT
    tajsreve saidNot sure if I agree with the OMG making it teeny bobber.. but what do I know. However, I think it is good, it just lacks commitment in your voice.. Meaning... maybe re-record it with someone who actually turns you on standing there to sing it to. Someone teasing you while your singing it. Just a thought! Hope that's not to negative.


    thanks for the feedback, hmmmm someone teasing me while i sing it? That could get messy! icon_razz.gif LOL anyways thankyou I'll keep that in mind icon_smile.gif

    azureskyy20: Mama knows child! haha however, OMG! is also used disgustingly often by many gays aswell!!! hahaha so does that make it a gay teen bopper song??? icon_razz.gif
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    Jun 17, 2010 8:28 PM GMT
    It sounds like something I'd hear on the radio, but it's not really my kind of song, so I dunno. Why are there no comments on YouTube?
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    Jun 17, 2010 8:51 PM GMT
    all I was getting at... was sing it from your feelings.. your heart....
    Any gay man can tell you about his first true love. the one that he could never have that totatlly turned him on. I am sure you have that too.
    Sing about it.
    as far as OMG being gay or tennie bobber.hell if I know.
    I use it in German and people tell me that it is gay.
    I guess it is a frame of reference thing.
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    Jun 21, 2010 7:10 PM GMT
    tajsreve saidall I was getting at... was sing it from your feelings.. your heart....
    Any gay man can tell you about his first true love. the one that he could never have that totatlly turned him on. I am sure you have that too.
    Sing about it.
    as far as OMG being gay or tennie bobber.hell if I know.
    I use it in German and people tell me that it is gay.
    I guess it is a frame of reference thing.


    thanks for the feedback man, I totally agree!
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    Jun 21, 2010 7:11 PM GMT
    MenschPress saidIt sounds like something I'd hear on the radio, but it's not really my kind of song, so I dunno. Why are there no comments on YouTube?


    don't know man....maybe cause i've posted it on other sites like here and facebook and people comment on the sites instead?
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    Jun 21, 2010 7:20 PM GMT
    What are you going for with the song?
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    Jun 21, 2010 7:56 PM GMT
    unfounded7 saidWhat are you going for with the song?


    what do you mean? what am I going to do with this song? or what am I trying to get across in the song? haha
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    Jun 21, 2010 8:08 PM GMT
    i really like the concept of the song.
    i like the style. i would like to hear some type of bridge where theres a difinitive change before it comes back. i also have trouble understanding some of the lyrics at some points (but then again im almost legally deaf)
    other then that i like it alot. great job buddy!
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    Jun 21, 2010 8:15 PM GMT
    I agree with Voice22 about the bridge.
    Other than that I think it's great!
    Awesome job!
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    Jun 21, 2010 8:45 PM GMT
    EasilyDistracted saidI agree with Voice22 about the bridge.
    Other than that I think it's great!
    Awesome job!


    Thanks for the feedback boys, i hear ya, i think it could use a lil something more there aswell.
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    Jun 21, 2010 9:43 PM GMT
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    unfounded7 saidWhat are you going for with the song?


    what do you mean? what am I going to do with this song? or what am I trying to get across in the song? haha

    What was your inspiration for the song? Were you trying to be sexy? Were you experimenting? Was there some mood or feeling you wanted to create for the listener?
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    Jun 21, 2010 9:48 PM GMT
    unfounded7 said
    crazycool said
    unfounded7 saidWhat are you going for with the song?


    what do you mean? what am I going to do with this song? or what am I trying to get across in the song? haha

    What was your inspiration for the song? Were you trying to be sexy? Were you experimenting? Was there some mood or feeling you wanted to create for the listener?


    The song is about the situation at a club we face from time to time where there is a guy you can't take your eyes off of, and he knows you want him, but instead of letting you in, he plays off of it and keeps teasing you cause he knows he can. He dances with you, gets you goin, then leaves you, but keeps you interested throughout the night, as he winks at you, smiles at you etc.... So its a mid-tempo, sexy track about a tease at the club, well...that was the intention anyway haha
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    Jun 21, 2010 10:06 PM GMT
    Gotcha. I appreciated more with some context. My personal preference would be to bump up the tempo. And to see you performing in a muscle t and tight jeans. icon_wink.gif
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    Jun 21, 2010 10:09 PM GMT
    unfounded7 saidGotcha. I appreciated more with some context. My personal preference would be to bump up the tempo. And to see you performing in a muscle t and tight jeans. icon_wink.gif


    LOL it's all happening, i have a dj remixing it into a house track and i will be performing in a muscle T and tight up jeans ;)