Another poem.

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    Jun 27, 2008 8:14 PM GMT
    Here is another one and hopefully some of you will like it.

    Going Under

    Was I so Bad,
    You'd put me Last.
    To make me Mad,
    It's in the Past.

    Your tantalizing Kiss,
    The love that Died.
    God how so I Miss,
    Was it me who only Lied.

    My heart turned Cold,
    Their words turned Crude.
    I once was Bold,
    And never Rude.

    My flesh torn Up,
    The blood that Drips.
    Filled up the Cup,
    To burn your Lips.

    The pain you Felt,
    Now I know what i'm Without.
    The knife you Delt,
    My eye will never Doubt.


    Something i've noticed almost all my poems are more morbid or sad than happy and loved filled. Though one writes about what they feel the most, no?
  • HndsmKansan

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    Jun 27, 2008 9:07 PM GMT
    I would agree, its easy to write and express the emotion you feel.... but I'd still like to hear about what you've learned from your experiences and what you will try and change the next time around.....